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I can spot so many things wrong in the 1st paragraph. Ill type it, fixing some things
One Day, A average man named Jameson was very sad since his parents passed away due to a accident. Then he found a mask that looked like a happy little girl's face in his garbage can. After he put the mask on his face it disappeared.
"I hope my life will be better then before" Jameson said with a sigh.
What Jameson didn't realize was his hair started becoming longer and reddish. Then his body started shrinking to the size of a little girl. He was shocked when he saw the world around him growing in size.
"Is it me or did everything become bigger somehow?" The now little girl said in a high pitched voice.
He started smiling when he realized he turned into a little girl.
I would continue but I think that's enough to show you there is a lot of mistakes, but good job.
One Day, A average man named Jameson was very sad since his parents passed away due to a accident. Then he found a mask that looked like a happy little girl's face in his garbage can. After he put the mask on his face it disappeared.
"I hope my life will be better then before" Jameson said with a sigh.
What Jameson didn't realize was his hair started becoming longer and reddish. Then his body started shrinking to the size of a little girl. He was shocked when he saw the world around him growing in size.
"Is it me or did everything become bigger somehow?" The now little girl said in a high pitched voice.
He started smiling when he realized he turned into a little girl.
I would continue but I think that's enough to show you there is a lot of mistakes, but good job.